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小弟拙作"獨走葡鄉"[全文完]多謝大家一直支持,有緣再見

 
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真係好好看.....看咗一個鐘眼都花..支持:smile_02:

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小連兄, you did a GREAT job, what a damn good story~ I have spent a whole day in the office reading your stories and I don't know what to say...such a realistic story about money and girls...the 2 only things that guys concern (at least for most of the guys)...I would like to say: THANK YOU for your effort and it's so mean to me...the feeling is so strong...hardly I can tell through text...so, anyway, thanks again and look forward to your new stories soon!

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原帖由 小連 於 2005-12-28 11:21 AM 發表
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這個故事的主角是澳門。
很多人會問,不是你嗎?為甚麼是她?

澳門除了大家都認識的夜夜笙歌及繁華景象外﹔
這裡還有不少古色古鄉、地靈人傑的地方,令人留而忘返,你 ...
i spent 2 nites finishing ur story, what a damn great story! u are so pro at writing and you should consider about writing a book!  it should fit well to the market!  pls write more for us!

actually, i am curious about the what came next to the bone girl and the bar girl.. .

非常精彩

小弟返工睇到ot,ot睇到收工(睇得太投入,停哂手無做野,比阿頭屌),返屋企食完飯再睇到尾

good...
成個故事非常好睇,但係個結尾有o的馬虎噃....
不過一句,good

好好睇~~~~十分正~~~~支持~~~~~~
(睇通頂~~~)

非常精采啊。thank you

在香港討論區中,最大得益
thank youxxxx

峰回路转,精彩绝论,发人深醒。

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