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小弟拙作"獨走葡鄉"[全文完]多謝大家一直支持,有緣再見

 
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終於睇哂,賭錢既過程真係精彩,
愛情果方面,其實都好普通,
唔係好慘姐^^
如果賭錢既著筆再多d同細膩d,
一定會更好.

希望你在此多寫文章........................................................
......

very good story

個故事幾正!!!
尋晚睇到2點幾....今朝1點睇到4點 =.=

Excellant story!!!
it like a movie, your writting skill is better than many professional writer
and many so call "U grad" just like me
Though this 2 hours reading time, i was experienced a great story and
different kind of life.
To my heart, thank you so much again.

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好有共鳴.....睇完有D感慨~~~ 人生如戲...斬下眼好似發左場夢咁....
好文章....支持~~!!

好精彩, 多謝你既分享!!!!!!

好在我係喺你呢個故事完咗至加入討論區同開始睇,唔駛好似其他巴打咁,等到頸都長埋,可以一口氣睇晒!

故事真係好吸引,追到我氣咳呀!

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